Naethin Brown
Name/Race/Class: Naethin Brown / Human / Class TBD
The images above are a little young and a little soft for Naethin. He's 16 now, growing a light goatee and distinctly more muscular (if still scrawny) than he was in his youth.
Alignment: Chaotic - Individual: Wild Man now, and probably growing into Chaotic - Neutral: Egotist.
Appearance: Swarthy-complected (e.g., Mediterranean), brown-haired, smallish 16-year-old, Naethin bears a tough, stubborn look on his face, giving off the sense that he expects the world to be against him. Occasionally, his youthfulness will break through the world-weariness and reveal an energetic optimism sparking in his large brown eyes. (He tries, desperately, to slough off such childishness -- it only brings you pain and disappointment, he thinks -- but sometimes the boy just gets caught up in the moment.) Dedication to hard labor and long hours has left his body well-formed and tan, though slim due to a lack of nutrition and favorable genetics. His clothing is ratty, though not as dirty as you'd expect, thanks to Naethin's inexperienced attempts to keep clean.
Tropes : Naethin is a gloomy, cranky, proud and passionate teen. In small group theory, he usually fills the role of Central Negative -- probably too much so for him to become the Silent Observer much. In an anime, he's probably the Emo Hero's Emo Rival, LOL. The Abused Runaway, I suppose. EDIT: Also, Jade-Colored Glasses and The Cynic . But if I fall into tropes for very long, just kill me. Or maybe 40 lashes would be better.
Trait Post: Buccaneer’s Blood.
Buccaneer's Blood Discovered (a little longer than my usual) Naethin's father had been a sailor, or perhaps a pirate, depending on who you ask. "Shore ain't from 'roundere," that much they knew, eyeing his ruddy brown hair suspiciously. He'd been gone since Naethin turned five, but his name hadn't disappeared: his mother had taken it and wouldn't let go, and so that was part of him, too: Naethin Brown. A dull name, but one that the boy's irrepressible storytelling uncles refused to let go about. "Yer a PIRATE!" would go the refrain. "Cap'n Ellsbury Brown, 'e gave 'em 'ell!" and they'd snicker. "Bury 'em!" and the laughter would explode into a dribbling riot.
It wasn't until Naethin walked into the Formidably Maid and gave his name to the curiously forward gal with the leather belts every which-way that it occurred to Naethin there might be something to it all. An old sea dog -- so anciently oceanic as to have salt flaking from his grey beard -- overheared the exchange, and his one good eye went wide with gummy shock & horror.
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"No! NO! Cap'n, no! I swears, on me life, Cap'n, weren't me! They tied me to tha mizzen, they-they were goin' ta cut me throat if I called out, Cap'n!" Naethin steps toward the trembling old man, attempting to show him via the nearer candlelight that he wasn't any sort of captain at all, let alone one to be so afraid of, but the terrified blubbering only grew louder and more incoherent, and the man stumbled from his bar stool perch. From the ground, he begged, "Naw, Cap'n Brown, I've lived me life too long ta be no mutineer, sar... please, please, Cap'n Brown, cantcher let an ol' dog die in his rum... cantcher... you... don'twannadie... I didnwanna...."
Finally, mouth agape, Naethin is rescued by the same leather-bound lass who'd triggered all this drama. "Well now, Black Jack, if ya want the Captain ta give ya yer leniency this black eve, then yer better be payin' off yer debts now, eh boy?" The "boy" is aimed at Jack, but she follows it with a happy wink to Naethin. "Come on, now, Jackie, pay yer tab an' lay off the gutrot... at least fer the night! Now g'won! Git!" Foreign gold clinks into the woman's rough hand, then disappears. She spanks the old man on his way, all the while keeping Naethin from interrupting or closing the distance enough to allow proper recognition to dawn.
Abruptly, she spins, in such an out-of-control way that her intimidating feminineness comes at Naethin in a disconcerting rush. He blushes, despite himself. His ruddy cheeks deepen further as anger at himself sinks in.
"Now then, Captain Brown..." the maid chuckles throatily. Her body wobbles and jiggles; either she's tipsy herself, or she's doing a marvelous imitation of the act. Now that she's this close, Naethin also notices that she's much older than he thought. "Naw, yer 'bout forty years too young, matey, and not near dead enough. His son, eh? Could be, could be. He did sow 'is seeds all 'cross tha seas, an' I should know, eh!" She cocks her head, in a "thoughtful drunk" post Naethin knows all too well from his family. "Naw. Grandson, you is. But one HELL of a 'semblance, boy! Hoo, a handsome 'semblance..."
Without warning, she sweeps Naethin close and planted a sloppy-but-rock-hard kiss on his lips. His eyes rolled... in much the same way as they would a few hours later, when a pair of brass-wielding thugs set upon him in the alley. His last vision was of the corsair blowing him a kiss goodbye....
Standard Trait: FYI, I'm considering Suspicious (+1 Sense Motive, SM is class skill - You discovered at an early age someone you trusted had lied to you, and often, leaving you to question the claims of others.) or Resilient (+1 Fortitude - Violent neighborhood, unforgiving wilds forced you to subsist on food & water from doubtful sources. You've built up your mettle as a result.).
Thoughtful Ramble: Statistically, Naethin has no strong point, unless perhaps it's his Constitution or Fortitude. He's an average kid who's achieved what tiny scraps of success he's found in life through hard work and absolute bull-headedness. But most of those gains have been lost due to misfortune and miscreancy, landing him at the bottom of the heap again. A jaded teen, Naethin is more likely to keep up his dukes than his hopes. He expects to suffer, and to endure. What will come to him at the end, he doesn't rightly know; hopefully wealth, and a chance to "show them", and the opportunity to take care of his half-mad mother, make up for having run away from her just over a year ago. He's small, and not especially strong, yet rooted with an iron will that makes him seem tougher in a fight than he really is.
Naethin's Updated Background The fatherless teenager Naethin has long been free-roaming, yet chained to a family and a life he couldn't seem to escape. His extended family is made up of ne'er-do-wells and the desperately poor, a people who might otherwise be called gypsies in another world. They tell tall tales and drink heavily to get by, providing cheap labor or midnight services to any who call, unless they can get out of the work. Poverty and hunger is rampant for them, and they do all they can to endure it. Among the families' many mythical stories is one that claims buccaneer blood flows through their veins: they sometimes call themselves landlocked pirates, down on their luck thanks to a foul enemy pirate's curse. Stories of buried treasure and drama on the high seas might have excited a younger Naethin; today, they stand as naught but bitter reminders of his family's false hopes and empty promises.
Three years ago: With his jaw set, Naethin bulled his way into the local schoolhouse. Because his family had never paid the taxes that fostered the place of learning, there quickly arose questions as to whether the child had a right to attend. Meanwhile, the other children soon grew to dislike the sullen, slightly undersized boy, whose attitude seemed to invite trouble and disdain (though inwardly, he simply expected it -- a fine distinction). Before the teacher could decide what to do about the strange creature who had embedded himself in the back of the room day after day, darkly staring at teachers, students, and blackboard with grim intent, the situation exploded into a physical confrontation. Ultimately, when they were pulled apart, Naethin, the larger boy, and the boy's cronies told stories that were impossible to sort out.
After a moment's thought, the teacher wondered if he could use this incident as justification to remove Naethin from the classroom... but Naethin resisted desperately, crying that he would do anything, "I'll pay, I'll pay!" Whatever the motivation -- pity for a lost, filthy child, pride in the boy's determination, or simply appreciation for the potential financial rewards -- the teacher decided to hire Naethin as a classroom gofer. Later, the boy began picking up extra work elsewhere, though there were soon mutterings that he must be stealing in order to produce the kind of money he was seen with at times, especially since his money was often taken from him by his abusive uncle Jeorge.
Through his work and the ad hoc lessons he'd gotten from family members -- some of whom really are former sailors -- Naethin has become relatively handy, though perhaps only somewhat more so than those children his age who also appreciate the meaning of hard work. Now, he doesn't *like* to work, nor does he like studying, reading, etc. They're all just means to an end, a very, very important end, and so he pushes himself through it, often with furrowed brow and a slight snarl, thinking about how lazy his family is, how some day he'll buy his mother a real house, someday he'll leave them all behind, some day, some day....
This conviction that wealth will buy happiness stems from a night when Naethin observed his uncle Jeorge and several other members of his family drinking and carousing their way through town. They seemed well on their way to the prison stocks, with violent overtones growing and growing at each pass, when suddenly, abruptly, they all went quiet. The older men took off their caps; the horn players and the drummers ceased their racket; the women coughed and brushed at tattered dresses. What was it? Naethin looked: just an old man.
"Ev'nin, Misser Grimloy," said Uncle Jeorge. "Good day, sir," said the others. "Ahh, shaddap!" growled the old man. There were a few other words, but that was the gist of it that Naethin understood at that age.
"Yessir. We will sir," said Uncle Jeorge, bowing and standing, bowing and standing. Muted, the rag-tag family shuffled homeward, or at least to where they'd last set up camp.
Since that day, Naethin knew he needed money to get his way... to make himself better than Uncle Jeorge... to shut them up, to shut them all up.
Naethin's father was a sailor, or perhaps a pirate, depending on who you ask, from outside the community; he settled down in Greenvale (or whatever the town's name was) for just a few years -- long enough to conceive Naethin, get roped into a marriage, buy a small shack on the outskirts of town, and rack up enough debt from business partners and gambling to send him scurrying out of town when the collectors came calling the second time. Naethin was five then. He's been told his father was the son of a great pirate captain, but this, like all the other ridiculous stories told by his drunken family members, no longer carries any weight with Naethin. If only he could find somewhere to go where they'd just shut up.
Since birth, it seems, Naethin's been running away. Maybe he got it from his father, an idea Jeorge would go to great pains to impress upon him. A loser, a runaway, a scoundrel. As an infant, Naethin was once found fleeing on all fours down the dirt road out of town (coincidentally, perhaps, heading toward the ocean). He grew up hating and loving his extended family, whose freewheeling laziness brought them equal parts scorn and pity from the townfolk, sickening Naethin and driving him to seek validation and hope elsewhere.
Today, the teen's relationship with his mother is wrought with complicated feelings. She's frail, easily rattled, and full of impossible dreams. She's proud of her boy for his fight over the school, but fearful that he'll get in trouble; amazed at his learning and jealously spiteful, too; seemingly never satisfied with anything he does, yet constantly assuring him (or herself?) that he's the best thing this family ever had, best thing she ever did. Once, she turned on him, accusing him of thinking he's better than her (he does, he bitterly realized then). She was drunk; it was the first time she'd really tried to beat him, first with her hands and then with a switch. He'd pushed her down in the mud, then ran away. He didn't come back for a time, either.
He'd run away before, to be sure, once getting so lost stumbling through Whitewood Forest (or whatever it's called) that he unexpectedly came upon the crags in the dark and nearly fell into nothingness. Since then, that's where he'd go each time he couldn't take living in Greenvale anymore. Sometimes he'd stay for a few days, once for almost a fortnight.
Ever since that confrontation with his mother, she'd faded. Naethin has wanted to reach out to her, bring her back from wherever her spirit's gone to, but words catch in his throat and his hands don't know what to do. He's helpless. The one freedom Naethin has is when he plays the drums; his favorite cousin, more talented than he, taught him after noticing his attention during one of the family's drunken revelries. Naethin avoids playing with the family, though sometimes they drag him into it; he'd rather just close his eyes, close his mind, and open himself to the rhythm beating on the drum . When he first heard the ocean, Naethin felt its rhythm in his chest, and it shook him to the core. What was this feeling? What was this place?
Flaws : I can't find anything about flaws re: Pathfinder except for their $2 PDF. Probably something I'd dig, but I won't hold a candle for them if you nix 'em.
I saw a lot of folks interpreting this query as asking for character flaws, not a mechanical "Flaw". OK then, for starters, Naethin is mildly addicted to Aeroltweed; almost violently opposed to alcohol, due to being abused by alcoholics and seeing his extended family flounder under its weight; highly critical of others' childishness, despite his own youth and occasional proclivity to foolish behavior; mildly suicidal, with urges that come and go, although they had originally been driven by a fear he would never leave home, now it may be driven by a fear he'll never return, etc; desperate to earn enough money to save/protect his impoverished mother; deeply angry/broken about that need; horribly afraid that he's not good enough to amount to anything -- his uncle called him Nuthin' instead of Naethin, for example; inexperienced on the sea, although he may have experience with lakeboats and swimming; very deep down, he's sexually conflicted, having expressed a "love" for his (male) best friend that he is unsure how to interpret; etc etc etc.
Massive Damage : Aye. Why not?
Editing : For grammar and spelling, yes. I will commit seppuku afterward, but you understand. If, on the other hand, you edit me for style and tone, I will commit murderku. You understand.
In Sum: You know how I do. The role-play is all. There is no perfect person or character. There is perfect grammar. If we all strive to engage one another's characters, it'll be that much more interesting and fun. Doesn't mean always agreeing or going along, especially if that's just so you can get to the next fight/dice roll. I can role-play in the starting bar room until the cows come home, as long as somebody's going along with me. Post length depends on how much fun I'm having. Arrr.
Naethin's drums: the doumbek .
Here's a table of Naethin's reactions toward the other characters for now. Past relationships TBD...
Character Relation Thoughts/Feelings Johnathan 'Jack' Stormchild Polar Opposites Naethin probably finds Jack's violent, thoughtless, free-spoken ways pretty repulsive. He may have found himself on the wrong end of one of Jack's more "communicative" expressions, and will continue to nurse the hurt for an unnecessarily long time. Selene Ordano Too Much Alike Naethin will surely be attracted to Selene, then pity her for her eyes, then be pushed away strongly by her abrasive personality. He's just as abrasive, but he won't see the parallels, not right away at least. I think over time they'd become friendly/sympathetic, but initially there will be conflict. Oh yes. The Great Melinko Suckered In I could play this a couple of ways, but given the mess of people Naethin doesn't like so far, I'll go with Naethin being completely sucked in by Melinko's act. He thinks Melinko is hot sh*t, and brilliant for being able to get out of work the way that he does. Naethin may even go so far as to be an unwitting pawn/spy for Melinko at times. I don't know how he'll react if/when he discovers the manipulation, though. Maybe he won't... plenty of people in real life like that, who don't realize they're being manipulated. Nemat Cailean Sense of Superiority Nemat's cheerful blindness to life's sorrows and troubles reminds Naethin of his dearest friend, Darius, whose innocence & ignorance verged on some form of mental retardation. Depending on his mood, this may appeal to Naethin greatly, as he was attracted to Darius in a number of ways. It may also disgust him. Given the state of affairs when the two blokes meet, and the fact that Nemat is a few years older than Naethin and still unable to recognize life's brutal vagaries, Naethin's liable to begin with disgust, or disapproval, at least. He may or may not end up being protective, too. William Stormchild Meh I don't see much personality for Naethin to grab hold of and react to. This is a secondary app, anyway. Withdrawn. Caitlyn Brennan Near-Nemesis The girl will remind Naethin far too much of Autumn Stoudt, the stuck-up rich girl from his hometown. They weren't enemies, per se, but it might turn out so well with Caitlyn. That said, as a sylph she may have tattoos that will complicate his reaction to her -- Naethin loves tattoos. Mar Bleeds-the-Waters Quiet Appreciation Naethin would probably see something of himself in Mar's bulldoggedness and sullen nature. On the other hand, he might fear becoming the target of the larger, stronger man's ire. Probably appreciation from a distance. (Sense a pattern yet? You will.) Jondera's character Damn Drunks Character is STILL secret, but the fact that (s)he's a bottle fairy/drunken master suggests that Naethin will be greatly repulsed, at least superficially. He did have affection/attraction for his family members who were *fun* drunks, but he's at a point where anyone who touches alcohol makes him rage. Yeah, gonna be tough for him on board a ship full of raging rum-aholics. Bahadır "Aydan" Hakan Probable Loathing Greedy, proud, egotistic... oh yeah, Naethin'll LOVE this guy. </sarcasm> Bart McCarran Admiration/Learning Naethin is quick to appreciate Bart's thoughtfulness and knowledge. "Where'djoo learn 'at?" He might actually approach the surgeon, with a guarded curiosity revealed by his words and body language. How he handles the booze side of the equation is a little up in the air, but at least he respects Bart's age, skill, and experience, somewhat. Maybe he recognizes the toughness brought on by life on the streets? Hewitt Balgerson Potential Friends Not threatened by the gnome's size or macho behavior, Naethin may find a fellowship in their ambitions for gold and wealth; while Hewitt's lack of wisdom *could* sink this relationship rapidly, I think Naethin may like being the wiser one, while appreciating the mage for his talents and reasonableness. Ulfgar Stormchild Respectful Distance Naethin respects Ulfgar's age and suspicious nature. The fact that he's a dwarf and a man with holy powers adds a layer of awe that taps into the teen's deeply hidden wonder for such things unknown, but by and large he'd probably give the older man a wide berth, as is his nature with most people, even those who attract/interest him most. The drinking will turn him off and disappoint his growing admiration. Withdrawn, sadly. Jacqueline DeLacey Hotchee Momma-wow! Holy crap, Naethin will just about lose his sh*t over Jackie! The scar on her face might turn many a man off, but for Naethin it's an amazing, fascinating addition to an otherwise beautiful, mysterious face. Women are distant, confusing, strange beings, and Jackie is no less these things; indeed, she may represent their apex in his mind. He may not approach her much, but he will stare a lot, and talk about her a LOT when she's not around. His affection/interest in Morrie may be significantly impacted by all this... Jalute Friendly Fascination Naethin will be absolutely no-fear interested in Jalute. He'll approach the frog-man with something akin to friendliness, at least for him. I'd hope the two would be at least amiable with one another, if not even friends. Lash Fearful Admiration Absolutely terrified of the older man's dead-eyed toughness, while also fantastically jealous of his relationship with Jackie. Naethin would probably love to grow up to BE Lash, but he can't imagine how he's supposed to behave around the man. Fear and these other emotions may drive him to confrontation, though, rather than silence or avoidance. Don't know what happens after that...! Jeviah/Aria Potential Crush/Friends & Opponent I think Naethin would very much like Jeviah, whose charm and attractiveness could sweep him off his very grounded feet. Naethin might be afraid of being associated with the maniac/idiot weakling, too, though. Aira's violent, drunken nature would push him away -- but it could very well make the appeal of Jeviah that much stronger. Kingmonkey's char Boss Like a Boss Well, obviously Naethin just kicks around whoever kingmonkey's playing. It's inherent in our natures. (Durr, he's still under construction. Hope we get something soon!) Alluria Long-Long Kin Naethin will probably see kinship between himself and the gnome, though how much she'll endure in terms of his grouchy pessimism and needling will go a long way in determining their ultimate dynamic. Liam Flintsmith Stay Away Not a lot of personality described here, but I'm guessing he's talkative and combative, liking to prove himself in fights. Naethin no likey. Brandon Potential for Good Friends Depending on exactly how they meet, Naethin & Brandon could readily discover a spiritual kinship in one another. He seems sensible & practical, and the selfishness probably won't upset Naethin, depending on circumstances.
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