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Creative poetry contest - All welcome!
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Lol, don't all reply at once.
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Sunset
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Last edited by thelogicalghost; Apr 21st, 2021 at 12:56 AM. |
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That was lovely, thelogicalghost. Thank you for that.
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Giacomo da Lentini was Here
My opened eyes knew that this time was right. Her soft approach could never be in haste, born from that flaming eye that burned the night, she'll vanish with a starlight's cold embrace. Her breasts that heav'd the warmer breath of day, afforded comfort to my weary soul. Though once she's passed the larks no more shall play, and her memories shall never more be be more whole, I'll find her fading kiss within my dreams, and love her more than poetry by morning's glow it seems. edit: Poetry's first draft is rarely perfect. Constructive observation from critical review allows a poet to refine the craft, improve the expression, and elevate the work. As sonnets go, there's room to grow.
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Day gives way to night; a glorious crescendo of colour and light. wait.. am I in the right thread?
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Lol I think so? 🤭
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The closer it draws
the more I fear it. Not the sunset itself. That is inevitable. But the loss of myself, before. I would like most, I think To run right up to the moment Full. Aware. Alive. And see the last colors of my life. Rather than dim, and clouded by storms that have wracked me, and taken from me everything I love. As a youth, I saw every day the sunrise. And didn't care about the set. Darkness was just another playtime. Or sleep time, until the sun rose again. But now... there may not be a sunrise. Only the last set.
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Quote:
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Vote for poem theme "Sunset".
Vote for category "Sunset" Alright time to vote folks! Cast your vote for your favourite "Sunset" poem! Poets: remember you cannot vote for your own poem. Good luck everyone! I'll give my first vote to Admin Dirk, because I really enjoyed the melancholy tone of it, but that's highly personal of course. Runner up for me would be Thelogicalghost, whose beautiful imagery captures the imagination wonderfully.
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I'll also throw my support behind Admin Dirk this week. Existentialism will always win with me!
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Ohhh very tough, but after reading them all a couple of times, I think I'll vote for Black Jim
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+1 to wishkamon's haiku.
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I agree with Wish - hard to choose just one when they’re all so beautiful!
I’ll cast a vote for A Sonnet for a Sunset. thelogicalghost’s poem made me think the most with its dichotomy of a sunset in an urban vs. a natural environment. |
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