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Yup, still live.
You can't tell that from some of the mentors, but yup... it's still alive.
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The pulse here is weak, but at least my mentor is busy in idk how many games, plus OutPlay.
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We're running a few classrooms. Just not much OOC to work with.
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Works for me.
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I'd like to consider myself to be some state of undeath.
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Corporeal or non-corporeal?
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Depends on who you ask
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Raylorne is both a ghost and a zombie/wight
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I just found this on my Twitter account.
I figured it'd be rather useful to other students (of dirkoth, at least, who is a hawk of words). https://twitter.com/Writers_Artists/...69728672559104 Will try to wow you later this week, dirkoth! I apologize for giving the impression of dropping off. I'm just struggling with creativity at the moment... Last edited by Vex; Jun 16th, 2015 at 08:05 AM. |
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Thanks Vex. I just bookmarked that for my own referential needs.
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I don't think I need help with regard to grammar, spelling and such. But I tend to be a minimalist writer, rarely more than a paragraph or two. I would like some help/suggestions on how to expand on my thoughts. Anyone have a good starting point or pointers for me?
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We have a lesson plan or two on that subject, Winter. But don't fret... a paragraph or two isn't necessarily "minimalist", or wrong. It's all about the context.
I've had times when eeking out two sentences was all I could get (over and over), so your paragraphs seem abundant by comparison.
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I'd say the beauty of this program is learning how to refine those paragraphs.
I considered myself an above average writer before starting this program, and I quickly learned how much I could improve on. Might even finish the program and start taking students eventually. How close to the end am I anyway Dirkoth?
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