[FATE] Venture City: Hold Back the Night

[ihinka]

[PopCultureBard]

I made some adjustments based on the feedback. As a note, I will be flying to Florida tomorrow morning and will be there until next Saturday night. I expect to have reliable internet access while I'm there, but free time may be hard to carve out so I'll likely be slower to respond. I will keep an eye on the boards though, and try to drop OOC convo when I can.

[Mitsubachi]

Thanks again Hotsu-sama I have tightened up that wording for stealth.

[Lightwielder]

Thanks for the feedback, so to start, lets take that "stubborn science advocate" aspect out , then emitting radiation as well as light, yeah i can add that, which can work as an advantage our trouble sometimes, i think it would make sense if Dawnlight is not harmed by it since he is the source of it, it actually gives him the extra agility synergy.. speaking of which, i use the other synergy to be able to throw the lightsabers like the jedis do, i can say that the energy of his body gets canalized into swords by some special hilts that also retain a part of that power for a while, at least for a few seconds, which allow the swords to be thrown against something .. but then dawnlight has to go and pick the hilt.. if after that explanation on how i use the energies i still have a point left, yeah i will check the srd to pick up an enhancement

[mystwatch]

Thanks for the feedback!

[Ursinorum]

Changed Natural weapon for Master Super Strength for like... no reason..

[GleefulNihilism]

[HotsuSama]

Originally Posted by Lightwielder

Thanks for the feedback, so to start, lets take that "stubborn science advocate" aspect out , then emitting radiation as well as light, yeah i can add that, which can work as an advantage our trouble sometimes, i think it would make sense if Dawnlight is not harmed by it since he is the source of it, it actually gives him the extra agility synergy.. speaking of which, i use the other synergy to be able to throw the lightsabers like the jedis do, i can say that the energy of his body gets canalized into swords by some special hilts that also retain a part of that power for a while, at least for a few seconds, which allow the swords to be thrown against something .. but then dawnlight has to go and pick the hilt.. if after that explanation on how i use the energies i still have a point left, yeah i will check the srd to pick up an enhancement

Having a subtle advantage in a Trouble can be a good thing - best aspects are 'double-edged' which means they can both create and solve problems based on context, which is good for drama! And yes, I agree Dawnlight wouldn't be harmed by the radiation, but it's still has to be something he's mindful of in case he harms others, perhaps?

I just want to make sure you don't think that you're limited to just the synergies for other powers? Power synergies are only common matches and 'recommendations', so don't feel like you have to shoehorn Dawnlight into having Super Agility and Energy Blast - if you wanted him to have Natural Weapon + Phasing or whatever, you can!'

[HotsuSama]

Okay everyone, we're closing in on the end-date. I will keep the date in place regarding new applications, so not much longer for last-minute arrivals.

But I have no problem with existing applicants tinkering with their characters after that date, just to be clear. I was later on feedback so I know some folks are still making updates based on that, so I don't want y'all to feel rushed. I'm going to give myself a few days to make decisions on applications and will still be around to chat about your concepts during that period.

Which leads me to the decision I've made. I will indeed be looking to fill two teams, but regrettably I can't fit everyone within those two teams (and I'm not entertaining the thought of three teams!). My ideal player count is typically 5, so I'm sticking with that here. In summary, I will be creating two 5-player teams.

[psuedenim]

Background updated and toying with some more aspects.

[GleefulNihilism]

[Tiger Basilisk]

Looks like almost everyone will make it in. That's great! Can't wait to find out which characters Assuming I make it in, of course!my own will get teamed up with.

[mystwatch]

Minor edits, I guess, and then hoping I get accepted... thanks for bearing with me!

[Sirviantis]

Great to hear about the two teams! Can't wait to see who you're going with. I doubt you can make a wrong choice.

[Touketsu]

Good luck everybody! I hope Faraday gets the chance to be super with all of you!