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Old 02-25-2019, 10:24 PM
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Old 02-26-2019, 08:59 AM
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Believe I'm done or up for review if it's offered.
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Old 02-26-2019, 10:45 AM
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I generally don't give very much in the way of feedback or reviews since my process is highly instinctual and I usually either like a character for the game I am running or I don't and I sometimes find it difficult to express how someone could improve upon that impression. That being said I understand how much work goes into creating these applications and I should make some effort to provide feedback. I will give each completed application some feedback in secret text in this post. Please let me know if I somehow missed that your application was complete and I will correct the table and add feedback for you asap.

I will mostly give feedback on things that I feel need some improvement and will do so largely in point form.







This is part one. More coming soon.
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Good luck Leo! Sounds like a good game.
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Old 02-26-2019, 01:32 PM
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I will be submitting an application. Working on concept now.
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Old 02-26-2019, 05:12 PM
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Hello! I might be interested, I have a few concepts in the wings but my brain is stuck on a Gnoll ranger right now. Are there any Gnoll bands in the Empire? If so, are they recruited into the military?
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I think Amelia has reached a stage where I am comfortable calling her complete (except for all parts of the sheet, but stats, skills and feats are set in place at least.) and I will look at doing an RP sample as well but those are extras
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Hello! I might be interested, I have a few concepts in the wings but my brain is stuck on a Gnoll ranger right now. Are there any Gnoll bands in the Empire? If so, are they recruited into the military?
There are plenty of Gnolls around, more so than Goblins, Orcs, Hobgoblins and their ilk combined.

Any Gnoll recruited into the army would have been conscripted as a slave, however.
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