[PF-1e] Prison Colony Krakengard - The Daylight War

[MoonZar]

The country that holds the portal to Krakengard is ruled by a king

Please, what's the name of the country that hold the portal?

[FoggyKnight]

Originally Posted by Fon

@FoggyKnight
Oh! Applying as a mute character again? I hope we both make it. It should be fun lol.

Last one was Henri, the healer in that M&M campaign. He was short-lived and that was a WHILE ago. Surprised you remembered him.

[Fon]

Originally Posted by FoggyKnight

Last one was Henri, the healer in that M&M campaign. He was short-lived and that was a WHILE ago. Surprised you remembered him.

Actually, I was talking about the long-lived Henri from Frag's Greek Mythic campaign lol. It's some pretty ancient stuff. (I think that's the only game we played together.)

[Thorsten]

Originally Posted by Squeak

Hehehe Thorsten... Made me wonder if he is going to eventually create The Machine of Lum the Mad.

Because revisionist history is awesome.

Haha, never heard about that one before, but now I kinda want to make it

App updated. Will figure out something for the extra credit before the deadline, but Lum should be covered now.

App done

[FoggyKnight]

Originally Posted by Fon

Actually, I was talking about the long-lived Henri from Frag's Greek Mythic campaign lol. It's some pretty ancient stuff. (I think that's the only game we played together.)

Wow, I had entirely forgotten about that one. The one I referenced was even older than she was!

Well, shoot. That means I've played a female mute monk before. Hmm.

Wait a second! That game only ended last year! How could I have forgotten her already. Jeez.

[Fon]

@FoggyKnight
Oh, that was a year ago? I kept thinking it was two years ago lol.

There's nothing wrong revising fun/interesting concepts though! I have been meaning to do that... but just haven't find the right game for those.

[Nostrus]

For the sake of completeness, Marcus is a Warpriest of Abadar.

[Humble Athena]

For better or worse, Raphael is done.

[Inem]

Sorry for general slowness on my part this week, we've got big things going on at work, so as expected a lot of last minute things are popping up. At this point I can guarantee I won't have time for a second round of reviews for anyone. I might be able to squeeze in a few first reviews if someone still wants one, but I make no guarantees. By the time I get home from work I'm pretty exhausted these days. Anyway, things will wrap up at work by the deadline, it's all scheduled stuff and once it's out of the way my evenings will be freeing up again, just in case anyone is worried this might delay the start of the game.

Originally Posted by MoonZar

Please, what's the name of the country that hold the portal?

I don't know, you tell me? As far as I can tell, no one has given the country a name (though I haven't read through all of the apps yet, I believe), so it's up to you to pick one. If you end up being chosen, it will be canon, as with everything else you write about the outside world, unless I a) find it exceedingly terrible or b) it conflicts with something someone else has written.
But other than that, the outside world is your playground to do with as you wish, including name the kingdom.

Originally Posted by Thorsten

App done

Originally Posted by Humble Athena

For better or worse, Raphael is done.

Awesome, been looking forward to reading those two

[Tein]

Hey, I'd love to get a first review if you get the chance. If you don't get around to it I understand 100%, but I'm still pretty new here and getting the hang of the app thing, so I love feedback! app

[Nomadic druid]

still tweaking my app but it's coming along... FYI

[Sir Alex]

Hey there,

I've revised my application to address the issues you touched upon in your review. I added a list of character goals, and some text supporting her cleric origins.

Thanks again for your consideration. I've got a character who will hold my interest within your interesting setting, and I'm excited to play if you'll have me!

[Shadowmaim]

Added another roleplay sample. Don't know if we're allowed to have more than one, but I wanted to show some of Roan's usual work as well as the reason he was sent to Krakengard.

If I had to delete one, or disqualify one I'd definitely choose the crime one.

[Fon]

@Shadowmain
I'm sure multiple RP samples are cool, but you should put the RP sample you want to be read above the optional one (and perhaps even mark the optional one as optional), just in case Inem doesn't feel like reading too much. He did say he doesn't want to be reading a huge novel for every single application after all.

Btw, if we both get in, we can be investigator buddies lol. PopCultureBard is applying with an investigator too. It'll be funny if there are three investigators in game. (Of course, it's also entirely possible that none of us will make it...)

@Inem
Btw, while I might not have given Tiktak a clear goal, that doesn't mean he won't have a goal. I wanted it to be flexible, a character development kind of thing. Eventually he'll probably want to ask the others what to do with his big problem, if he make it that far.

Actually, you know what? Since you have so many applications to deal with, I'm just going to add that into my application, so you don't have to keep an extra mental note. I updated Tiktak's background with an Addendum. That will probably be my only update!

[Squeak]

HERE is something for those who are anxiously awaiting Inem to make his decisions.