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@CatCanCook - Minus choosing an option for the Mythic Boon: Expertise my application is complete. If I am missing anything or of you have any questions let me know. You may recognize Davor from our previous, if incredibly brief, foray into WotR.
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~ To be alive is not to live; living requires reaching beyond survival for something more. Reach for that something and find what dreams breath life into your existence. ~
Tedzies throws his hat in! The competition just got FIERCE!
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“Those who will not reason, are bigots, those who cannot, are fools, and those who dare not, are slaves.”
― George Gordon Byron (Lord Byron)
Recruiting for Assault on Origin.
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"The baby has known the dragon intimately ever since he had an imagination. What the fairy tale provides for him is a St. George to kill the dragon."
-G.K. Chesterton, Tremendous Trifles (1909), XVII: "The Red Angel"
Hearing a voice, you look about and see no one. However, peeking down, you spot a large winged lizard about the size of a dog. His crest and scales bear a fiery red. He wears a breastplate and a durable pack on his side. Wings lie folded on his back. Glittering jewels compliment the tan hues of his underscales. Unlike some mere pet, the lizard's slitted eyes look bright and excitedly inquisitive. A youthful smile shows all too sharp teeth. Claws click a steady rhythm on the floor as he approaches. Squatting on his hindquarters, he offers a claw for a friendly shake. Despite these hints at the apex predator to be, his expressive face holds enough youth to look more cute than fearsome (somewhat to his chagrin). When you are not forthcoming with a handshake, the small wyrm snorts. Smoke curls from his nostrils and weave around his frame. Quickly, he shifts in size up to man-sized reptilian. The proffered handshake seems a little easier to accept.
The reptilian glances behind with narrowed eyes. A hulking owlbear crashes from the forest brush, howling a promise of a brutal death. Smoke wafts again from the reptilian's nostrils and swirls around him. He roars before the sound grows deafening as he shoots up to match the size of the unnatural beast. Vicious claws and fearsome fangs brandish. A mighty tail sways menacingly behind like a serpent. Scorching flames erupt from his maw, forcing the owlbear back and giving it pause. The large dragon pounces upon avian monster. Rolling around in a deadly flurry of fang and claw, they go tumbling into the brush. The raging sounds of battle end with a sudden crunching sound. The forest goes still for a moment. The dragon emerges from greenry, dragging the owlbear carcass behind him. Messy crimson coats all over both predators. While it blends with the dragon's scales for the most part, it stands out starkly on his toothy grin. He yips with boyish excitement. The dragon goes over how the battle went and intersperses grateful exclamations to "the Lady" amid his play-by-play recount. Pausing, he cranes his long neck up a moment and licks his forked tongue around his lips. He remarks that it was rather tasty. With a final yank, he drops the carcass closer and asks if you want a piece. Later that day, slabs of owlbear meat sizzle over an open campfire, tended by the dragon with a gourmet's care. He encourages everyone to have a piece but cleans off the leftovers himself.
Lunigen has a peculiarly cheery, excited wonder about him. The wide world is so vast and full of so many wondrous things. This childlike enthusiasm is just so unflappable that insults & misfortune slide off him as easily as water off his scales. This is not to say that he never gets angry or indignant, just that there are few ways to do so. He has a child's simplicity about a lot of things. His wants and recreations are similarly simple, mainly creature comforts ... for the most part. Lunigen is still a dragon, and those instincts color his interactions. He has a predator's nonchalance about blood and death. He delights in jewels and precious metals, rather possessively. Odd for his kind is a similar attitude toward his few friends. Most might chuckle over the dragon calling friends part of his hoard. Yet, he is perfectly serious. Jest would only be answered in jest, but woe to anyone daring to threaten his hoard! The line between cute and predator is a wicked chomp away. More so, the dragon always seems hungry and none too picky about what.
Lunigen has two great drives. First, he is a "mighty, noble dragon" and proud of it (even though he has interacted with very few other dragons nor knows too much about them). Being underestimated for his small size was a bit of sore spot for him for a long time, but he has grown since and garnered more of the proper respect for a predator. Second, he is a "dutiful knight" in the service of Lady Iomedae. He has Father Sunnestier's upbringing to thank for that. Mention of his Lady is seldom far from his lips. He is a soul of courtesy, and chivalry will be dead over his cold, dead body. The knight is both demanding of himself and generous to others ... to a point; his lair is not going to decorate itself. Safe to say, it is hard for most to reconcile the dragon knight. For Lunigen, even now his more gentle nurture often struggles with his more primal nature.
The story of Lunigen the dragon begins decades ago with one of the earlier adventures of the demon hunter Eterrius Sunnestier. He and a squad were on mission urged by ancient dragon Terendelev. Dragon sightings had increased of the decidedly chromatic variety. Yet, rather than terrorizing the populace surrounding the city, each dragon sighting involved dragons under pursuit. The troubles of chromatic dragons were hardly something Terendelev ever looked into, much less the Mendevians. However, this time, Terendelev saw something more disquieting, a demon leading a troupe of cultists after one of the dragons. The silver dragon and the veteran demon hunter set out to investigate. The paths of destruction were easy enough to follow. But why the sudden interest by the hordes?
The answer soon revealed itself within one cavern upon a mountainside. Father Eterrius crept within to find a battle in progress. A towering glabrezu demon was cornering a red dragon further back into its lair. Both creatures were bleeding badly, but the dragon had the worse of it. A trail of roasted cultists led up to a circle of cultist pikemen harrying the dragon. Father Eterrius spied a nest of eggs behind the red dragon's tail. The dragon, clearly the eggs' mother, was not backing down and snarled menacingly at the demonic intruder. The glabrezu sneered and bade her to hand something over. A gout of flame was her answer. The cavern shook again with tooth, claw, breath, and sorcery. The demon hunter was torn enough by the scene for some time while Terendelev was content to simply allow the battle to take its course. Then, the red mother stumbled under a particularly telling blow. The glabrezu pressed its advantage to clamp a pincer about her throat. Father Eterrius came to a decision. He summoned mystic might to tear loosened stones from the ceiling. The distracted glabrezu roared in shock before the weakened demon was crushed beneath. The demon hunter's squad set upon the surprised cultists who avoided the collapse. Badly broken beneath the rubble, the glabrezu snarled and cursed before vanishing away.
Father Eterrius rushed around the cave-in to find the red dragonness. She was still alive but, from the look of her terrible gashes, she was not long for this world. Terendelev strode within and gazed on the fallen dragon. She noted that there was little anyone could offer at this point. The red dragonness weakly growled at the small intruder and hated kindred. She scoffed whether they had come to finish her off. Father Eterrius shook his head. Confused, the red dragonness spared a rare look of relief. Glancing at the cave-in where her invader had once been, she snorted something under her breath, probably the closet to an expression of gratitude managed by the proud, selfish lizard. She craned her weakened neck toward her nest. Her face fell, and she bellowed a pained wail. The demon hunter drew closer and found all the eggs crushed underfoot (a very large demonic foot). Apparently, her rescue of her nest had come too late ... no, a moment. The hunter's sharp eyes spied something amid the gore and broken shells. Sweeping a hand through it, he pulled out a smaller egg that had escaped the invading dragon's wrath. Relief shone on the red dragonness' face, only to turn bittersweet. She had no illusions about her survival this day. She glanced from the egg to the little mammal cradling it. For a brief moment, she shed the proud gaze of a wyrm to took on the pleading hope of a mother. Terendelev scoffed but kept silent. Father Eterrius silently nodded and softly smiled. A raspy breath of relief passed the red dragonness' lips. She laid her head down, too tired to keep it up. She had no idea why the demon set upon her lair and remarked about some irony, given clutch's father. Weak chuckles turned into wracking coughs until a wheezing breath marked her passing. Father Eterrius and Terendelev held a moment of silence for the mighty wyrm. Then, he took the egg with him.
The demon hunter eventually returned to Kenabres and the Cathedral. Terendelev warned him the whole time of the foolishness of taking a chromatic dragon in. He would not be dissuaded. Although the little egg took its time about it, eventually, it stirred. Beneath the light of a full moon, a tiny runt of a wyrmling emerged, endearing as only babies could be. In a poetic fit, Father Eterrius named the little one, Lunigen, an old name meaning "born of the moon." Years passed as the priest raised the wymling at the Cathedral. He spared no effort attempting to investigate the demon's interest in the dragonness or the wyrmling or ... something. Yet, he learned little. His own brother crusaders gleaned little insight of their own. Some counseled to end the chromatic wyrmling and be done with it. But more cautious heads prevailed.
Years passed. There was little unusual to notice. Father Eterrius was expecting a young one with strong instincts toward selfishness, and Lunigen was certainly one such. His tough little scales often received disciplining. Still, the little dragon always felt loved. The demon hunter taught Lunigen what he knew, from erudite lore to surviving in the wilderness. As a natural predator, the little dragonling took to the latter lessons with a relish. As he grew, fang and claws and sorcery began to emerge, the hunter focused more on discipline and moderation. Control over one's own strength was the greatest strength of all. The model of the heroic St. Clydwell and the august Lady of Valor was never far. The skeptical Terendelev kept a close eye on the chromatic wyrmling, but even she warmed up to growing lad. The elder dragon found herself often fielding barrages of eager questions from the wyrmling about their kind. It was obvious (& adorable) that the little one awed over his senior, a model of a "mighty, noble dragon."
The first rare surprise was the boy's appetite. Lunigen was always hungry. He loved to sample new flavors and varieties; much of that involved hunting down new types of prey and different approaches to roasting or seasoning it. The hunter did not have to wonder where the dragon put it away because the runt grew fast. As Terendelev observed, it was far faster than any dragon should. Within a few decades, Lunigen had grown as big as his guardian. Yet, neither appetite nor growth showed any sign of slowing. Father Eterrius remained unconcerned. The heads of the various crusader orders had a far greater variety of opinions. A particularly vocal member of the Order of Heralds called to outright execute Lunigen to halt the danger. However, the others heeded Father Eterrius' counsels. Lunigen would simply be observed further.
So steeped in the tales and rites of the Medevian Crusaders, it was little wonder that Lunigen desired to join them. Reluctant, Father Eterrius delayed as much as he could. Eventually, the hunter was greeted with a vision from his patroness. The vision reassured him to permit Lunigen his desire. Father Eterrius told Lunigen all he had seen and heard. The dragon grew excited at the thought of becoming a knight, encouraged by the Lady herself. The hunter embraced his son in all but blood. The dragon may have shed a tear or two ... but only the most manly draconic of tears, of course. The dragon's training only grew more intense from then, but Lunigen took to it with gusto. When Father Eterrius' duties at the cathedral absorbed his attention, Lunigen split his time between the guards on the city ramparts and mighty Terendelev whenever she was around.
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"The baby has known the dragon intimately ever since he had an imagination. What the fairy tale provides for him is a St. George to kill the dragon."
-G.K. Chesterton, Tremendous Trifles (1909), XVII: "The Red Angel"
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Reason: final build edits & cleanup
Show the stats. With that race you have 23 build points.
Please separate what you get per character level, and state the source of each feat or talent, so I can account for them.
Mathematical Prodigy - has you pick a skill. Please identify it.
If you are taking Object Bond then you have to think through what it is via the listed options.
You seem to be claiming too many talents for (tradition). A Tradition gives exactly 4 talents. It looks like you are claiming 8. Clarify where every talent comes from.
Show the stats. With that race you have 23 build points.
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Please separate what you get per character level, and state the source of each feat or talent, so I can account for them.
I think all are accounted now. The sources for talents are the 2 initial magic talents, mythic magic talent ability, martial tradition, or blended talent.
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Mathematical Prodigy - has you pick a skill. Please identify it.
Noted now; it is for arcana so that he knows about dragonkind.
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If you are taking Object Bond then you have to think through what it is via the listed options.
What is a good option for unarmed/natural attack folk? Is there any variation, weapon or otherwise, of the amulet of mighty fists?
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You seem to be claiming too many talents for (tradition). A Tradition gives exactly 4 talents. It looks like you are claiming 8. Clarify where every talent comes from.
It should be clearer where each talent comes from now. Let me know if anything still ambiguous.
Does Fear and Flame potentially cause the fear state to worsen each round? E.g., normal foe fails & becomes shaken, next round fails & frightened, next round & panicked? The feat says that a save occurs each round on fire and a successful save reduces fear by one level, so a fail escalates?
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"The baby has known the dragon intimately ever since he had an imagination. What the fairy tale provides for him is a St. George to kill the dragon."
-G.K. Chesterton, Tremendous Trifles (1909), XVII: "The Red Angel"
Would you allow a ground wasp swarm to be purchased and how much would it cost? Closest to bee swarm that Pathfinder provides so figure easy pallet swap.
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