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Last edited by Ermine; Oct 22nd, 2024 at 09:46 AM. |
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Last edited by Lentil Sponge; Oct 18th, 2024 at 07:21 AM. |
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Character done and update, ready for review whenever your ready LS
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Akhim the Chameleon-Folk Monk
Name: Akhim Akherremshi
Party Role: Scout Alignment: Lawful Good Class: Monk, Way of Shadow Race: Chameleon Folk https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bzj...J3qgobG5taJkYA Appearance: Personality: Akhim comes across at first as very stoic and peaceful. However, he is a real prankster and uses his stealth to play tricks on his friends. If you ever felt something was moved slightly from where it was, that was probably Akhim who's now hiding on the ceiling. On the flip side, Akhim has no filter. None whatsoever. He says literally whatever he thinks at any point, and it often causes problems with people he is supposed to be diplomatic with. Diplomacy is not his middle name. But in his eyes, it doesn't need to be. What he sees as important is to be be honest and true, to fight for the greater good, and to do no harm to innocents. He has no qualms with killing the enemy, because he serves the greater good. And he has no qualms with breaking the law, as long as it does not negatively impact an innocent. Therefore, theft from anybody but someone that is corrupt or evil is strictly against his code of ethics. Non-forced entry to look at documents and then put them back, however, is not. Last, Akhim gets flustered around beautiful women and his skin turns bright red. And again, his lack of filter causes him problems. He doesn't objectify women, but has a hard time not blurting out how radiant and powerful a woman is, and can never make eye contact afterward. History: Akhim's clan of Chameleon-Folk is located in a section of forest with five distinct Chameleon territories, ruled over by five different clans. They are allies with one, tentatively peaceful with one, and vacillate between times of tense peace and times of all-out war with the other two. Each clan has their own warrior tradition that breeds generation after generation of elite warrior, masters of stealth and close-quarters combat. Akhim was raised in his clan's warrior monastery and quickly became a master of stealth. The combat took a bit more time, but he caught on and became adept in use of his hands, feet, tongue, elbows, knees, head, quarterstaff, and darts to kill his enemies. He was raised during an extended period of tense peace, but then a fearsome war broke out, the consequences of which left him needing to get away. He travelled to the nearest city, and as he was entering he encountered the caravan- and saw an opportunity to travel far distances while putting his skills to the test and hopefully honing his craft against greater foes and obstacles ahead. Playerbrew Aspect #1 - A Country: Mirabel- This nation is an island in a sea of ice, a frozen wonderland filled with beautiful architecture and ruled by a Winter Queen. Like an iceberg, this nation would seem to be a paradise on the surface except for the class divides, the ritual sacrifices, and the slave labor that keeps the nation running. Also, beneath the city there is an intricate network of mines and shafts and tunnels built to search for the Hidden Treasure- the rumor in the ice for which the nation was planted in the location it was. Playerbrew Aspect #2 - A Trader: Fafelunfer is a naked mole rat man, wrinkly and pink, that trades in exotic furs. He values modesty and grit, and has a lot of it- working hard 24/7 for his craft but never flaunting the work or his resulting wealth. He is decidedly callous, and doesn't hold life to any sort of inherent value, although he really really likes flowers and especially brightly-colored wildflowers. Last edited by YodaGandalf; Nov 16th, 2024 at 11:22 PM. |
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Sylphie is done, pending any notes you may have~
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I would start giving out some feedback for people, but errrrr, my internet is bad so, ummm, good luck without my guiding hand!
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Bow works. Plan on sticking with the rolls outside of the class. I will reroll the class since two folks have already applied as a ranger.
Edit: Barbarian it is. Going to work.. Just need to find a photo.
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Goblins, Kobolds or any other small race !!! If you are allowing or want one sign me up. Last edited by Kshnik; Oct 19th, 2024 at 06:14 PM. |
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Bowbarian?! Woo~
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Posting interest! I'll use the random character generator and see how I fare!
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Goblins, Kobolds or any other small race !!! If you are allowing or want one sign me up. Last edited by Kshnik; Oct 22nd, 2024 at 05:16 PM. |
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Well, my game hasn't even been approved yet, and already I'm looking at ten REALLY good applications. And I can only pick five of you, assuming that no one else jumps in before whenever my deadline comes up. Ooops.
I know some of you have little bits in your application asking about notes, so I might as well give what thoughts I can contribute. Note that if you agree with my notes, and then implement them, that doesn't necessarily guarantee a spot in the game. Just that the notes I have are what I think would give you the best chance. Honestly, though, it is looking like it will be an incredibly difficult decision to make already, and I'm sure there's more great applications coming. Not looking forward to narrowing you guys down to five at all. |
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