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Kiar Kirloss
Name: Kiar Kirloss Race: Human Class: Rogue Alignment: Chaotic Good Deity: Desna, but not in any large way. Background: Born in the poorer part of Almas, Kiars? father was part of a gang of thieves and quite abusive to both him, his siblings and his mother, he was fond of a drink and often arrived at their small hovel of a home and would beat up Kiar, and his mother, One stormy night Kiar retaliated upon seeing his mother getting beaten up picked up a knife that was laying about and stabbed his father in the back, he was 12 years old. Panicking at seeing his father on the floor with the knife in his back and with his mother on the floor unconscious Kiar ran, he eventually crawled into a wagon somewhere in the city and fell asleep. When he awoke he was miles away on the road to Riverford, part of a caravan. Managing to stay hidden for the journey to Riverford stealing what food he needed Kiar left the caravan and managed to survive in the town for several weeks before he got caught stealing some food from an inn, telling the innkeeper he had no family and nowhere to go for some reason the innkeeper and his wife took pity on him and allowed him to stay in the stable for guests and he worked there for them for a few years. A few weeks ago some men were passing through and stayed at the inn and Kiar recognized his father, fear struck Kiar and he again ran, this time being a few years older Kiar managed to get work on a caravan heading to Falcons Hollow the next day. Kiar does not know if his father spotted him. He now finds himself in Falcon?s Hollow looking for work. Personality: Kiar is a quiet sort who keeps himself to himself, although if he gets to know you and judges you a good person, a better friend you could not find. He hates bullies and will stand up to them more often than not, although he bears a strong fear of his father. Appearance: Kiar is small for his age of 16 years at only 5 ft 1 inch (did not roll for this but hope it?s OK to have him the minimum age) his short curly hair is light brown and his green eyes give him a mischievous look yet when he smiles you can?t help but smile back. I have also given you permission to edit Eddas. Any questions just ask. Last edited by Lothiangamer; Jul 11th, 2013 at 02:02 PM. Reason: adding application post |
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I made a couple small adjustments. Fixed your HP, you had it too low. Also put in your exp.
You're short a language. Oh, and if you want to take a look at the other character posts in this forum, then edit your first post to match those, that would be great. Just need to post your app here as the first post. |
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