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Old Apr 20th, 2021, 08:30 PM
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Whoop whoop my however is correct. We won't talk about tenses.... Lol.
My however's, however, were not correct and were subsequently purged into the void

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Old Apr 20th, 2021, 09:25 PM
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I am working on giving some feedback. I generally don't like doing it as it generally makes me feel like an arrogant peacock, but I'll have something out tomorrow, hopefully. I am halfway done my draft now.
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Old Apr 20th, 2021, 09:49 PM
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I generally don't like doing it as it generally makes me feel like an arrogant peacock,
Will it help if we all promise not to pluck your tail feathers for use as quills, even if we don't get in?
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Old Apr 21st, 2021, 01:45 PM
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I will provide a small amount of feedback in three sections.

1) Writing: I will give a brief and succinct evaluation of the writing both in terms of its quality and function (Grammar, spelling, etc) and "style."

2) Character: I will give a brief opinion of the character and include any suggestions I might have to improve upon it or otherwise comment on how he or she might fit in the game.

3) Approximate rank: I will speak briefly about how likely the character is to have the desired Template and where the application stacks up so far and whether improvements might nudge it higher in that ranking. I will speak generally whether I think the application might rank, high, middling, or low in my esteem.

Preacherwolf - Lady Gwendoline Oakwater
 
triedtherest - Severous Crow
 
Firecat - Nichros Derry
 
ShadowcatX - Jaaren
 
mightymconeshot - Wyran the Fallen
 
Elanir - Sergius
 
Ermine - Dao Wu Feng
 


I have 3 incomplete applications remaining: Charsis by Rakaghi, Llordaeron Yaeru by Jacobzilla, and Aegion Melwasul by Tyeal.

I have set the deadline for Friday April 23rd, but if anyone puts their foot in the door with the bones of an application before the actual deadline I can allow more time for completion.
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Old Apr 21st, 2021, 02:20 PM
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Thank you for the incredibly detailed feedback.
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Old Apr 21st, 2021, 07:26 PM
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Thanks for the detailed feedback. It really does help

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Alright! Had to knuckle down for a couple hours but I hammered out Aegion's application! Majority of details should be there but I'll go back and provide edits and clarification should Leo find the time to review it.
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I think Llordaeron's done if you want to grade him as well.
I see we have a few alchemists but there's enough alchemical items we probably wont overlap.

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I have updated the applicants table.

Jacobzilla - Llordaeron Yaeru (Lloyd)
 
Tyeal - Aegion Melwasul
 


I have good reason to believe Unforgiven will complete his application before the deadline or very soon after and since he has already placed his foot in the door, I may delay invites slightly to allow him, and any other newcomers, to craft their entry.
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I am adding Grave Knight

AND

Apostle Kyton

to the list of available templates.
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Eviltedzies Application:
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Name: Sinadra
Race: Half Elf
Class: Antipaladin
Archetype: Soulrender
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Intended Role: Undead Minions, Demoralizer, Melee Damage
Template Preference: Graveknight > Necropolitan > Death Knight

 


 


 


 
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Old Apr 23rd, 2021, 09:17 AM
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I am adding Grave Knighr

AND

Apostle Kyton

to the list of available templates.
I'm assuming (since as of the time I'm writing this, they're not in the first post) these have the 2 level adjustment? And are 25 point buy?

Also, updated my template preference accordingly.

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