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D&D 5e-Half-Orc Variant and Tanarukk
Last edited by Crucius; Jun 12th, 2020 at 03:00 PM. Reason: Reset Human-Orc and balanced other Subraces |
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Just a little bump, I would really love some feedback here. I’m a little new to the site so if anything is amiss here I swear I didn’t do it on purpose. If I’ve made some obvious or grave error please let me know so I can rectify it. Thanks!
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I made some adjustments after looking over a guide to race balance and I think it’s looking a little better. I’d still love to hear anyone’s ideas or suggestions.
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First, clarify that the "Half-Orc Variant" is the base and the rest are 'sub-races' or 'other half'.
I had to lookup Powerful Build in 5e, but that all looks fine. Otherwise it looks pretty good. In general, I would recommend putting what changes were made in your comments so that people that come along later can follow along. -me
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Okay, thanks! I’ll put that list here.
Also, what would be the best way to differentiate the races and subraces. I italicized the subraces in addition to the boldness originally but should I put a base race tag on the base race? Or is there maybe an indentation feature I could use? Last edited by Crucius; Feb 10th, 2020 at 05:21 PM. |
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TBH, it would be best to try to replicate the formatting of the PHB. One of the best tools for this is The Homebrewery. That is listed, among other resources on the Unearthed Arcana subreddit. I think that you'll honestly get a lot more feedback if you post your work there. I'm glad you're here, and I hope you get more feedback, and I hope you use this stuff in an RPGX game! But as a simple matter of traffic, you're going to get a lot more eyes on your work over there.
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Thanks! I tried to change to PHB style. Hopefully that looks more comprehensible.
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Put a blank line between the main and subs is a good start.
-me
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Done, thanks!
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Update, I decided to change the human-orc to match the half-orc as listed in the PHB. After that, I slightly reduced the power level of the other subraces to fit the power level of the new human-orc.
I’m still open to any suggestions or comments. Any response would be greatly appreciated ![]()
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“He who opens a school door, closes a prison.” - Victor Hugo Last edited by Crucius; Jun 12th, 2020 at 03:15 PM. Reason: Added changelog |
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