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Meet The Judges
This thread is for each of the hosts and judges for this year's competition to introduce themselves as well as to share a little about what they think the ideal submission would look like. All contestants are recommended to read this thread carefully, and note what the judges are looking for, and how they will score you. As per the last few years, there are 'judging guidelines' to help make the judgments not too surprising, create more consistency between them, and help carry some of the load for those judging!
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Iron DM 2023 is here - Check it out!!
GM of: Dark*Matter: The Hoffmann Institute (2007 HOF), Traveller: The Third Imperium, Strixhaven: Academy for the Gifted & Game of Thrones: House Ascending New here? Try a New Player Solo Game for 13th age, CoC, DnD, FATE, Pathfinder, Traveller. Last edited by savoylen; May 16th, 2023 at 01:04 AM. |
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Savoy here, at your service as one of your hosts!
I'm really looking forward to seeing what you bring to the table in this year's competition. I'll be serving as the chairman this year which is mostly about answering questions, arranging the brackets, tracking the results from round to round, judge wrangling and, doing whatever bananabadger and Ildrahil ask. Firstly, I appreciate the commitment and hard work that goes into competing in the Iron DM. Please have a sense of humor and humbleness when receiving feedback from us. You're signing up for criticism and praise but its that first one that gets people sometimes. In this year's tournament format, we are all reading A LOT of games. I've asked the judges to score each pairing and using the "win, loss, draw" format and to provide feedback only on the criteria that had the biggest impact on their decision. As a judge we want to give guidance on what will help hone and deepen your already strong DM skills and sometimes, we have to dig deep to find something that might help. Regardless, these are just our opinions and always meant to be constructive. Don't take it as a personal hurt or attack. That isn't why we do this. My best 'pro-tip' for you is not to get too hung up on the numbers game but to really lean into the judge's comments. There is some real gold in there and if you really want grow in your skills the Iron DM arena, that is exactly what you'll do. Truly, we're here to build you up - both when you advance and when you don't. ![]() A little about myself:
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Iron DM 2023 is here - Check it out!!
GM of: Dark*Matter: The Hoffmann Institute (2007 HOF), Traveller: The Third Imperium, Strixhaven: Academy for the Gifted & Game of Thrones: House Ascending New here? Try a New Player Solo Game for 13th age, CoC, DnD, FATE, Pathfinder, Traveller. Last edited by savoylen; Mar 5th, 2023 at 11:56 PM. |
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Welcome to Iron DM 2023! I am here to serve on Savoylen's triumvirate of organizers and to fill in as a judge when needed. Also, and more importantly, I am here as your fan. It takes a lot of time and effort to submit these entries. I understand and respect that. I promise to work to make this a great experience for the time you will put into the event. I'm delighted that this year features innovations such as four short opening rounds of no-elimination play. These are changes inspired by member comments and built on respect and admiration for the formula that has been perfected over the years. So, let’s go forth—kind, bold, and brilliant! And ... if you are in it to win it (and why not?), here are my Top 7 BananaBadger Tips. Now get out there! Whip those ingredients into shape! Oh yeah, and sign my jersey with your name and numner on it, will ya? I'm your fan!
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Howdy and welcome to the 2023 edition of Iron DM!
I volunteered to do this because I can't wait to read what you all create. I have read them all, every entry, every year since I started on this site. Why, you ask? Is it because I'm a masochist? Is it to help me sleep at night? Could it be as penance for some long ago misdeed? No, it's none of those things. It is because what has been created and what you all will create is amazing. What you all are getting ready to do is quite an undertaking. You will have to devote time to make each entry the best they can be. But what you create will also live on. Know that you can use what you make here and others will use it. The directions you go and the things you write will serve as inspiration for you and for other for years to come...so congratulations and thank yous are in order. Yes, in order to make a good omelet you have to break a few eggs and we certainly hope what you create is as tasty as this feta and spinach omelet. There is Spartan blood flowing through my veins and feta is my cheese of choice...don't judge...that's my job here! Please keep in mind as you create the people here judging are all volunteers. Understand that they have real lives outside of here and they will get to your submissions when they can. Also, you can disagree with a judge's opinion but still respect it. Remember, we all have opinions which are informed by many factors, each opinion is unique, and none of them are wrong here. So, break some eggs but lets be civil about it and not break any relationships. As my friend and fellow adventurer bananabadger said so well, I am you fan. I have no doubt what you create here will be simply amazing. To help you achieve that amazingness, you should take a quick stroll down memory lane and read what some of the others who have come before you have written. Although this year will be slightly different than last year, which was slightly different than the year before, inspiration never changes. Also, take some time to familiarize yourself with the rules. As far as tips go, I'm going to list a few, starting with the most important:
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![]() Hello there I have been invited by the esteemed hosts and creative team to be one of the judges. I have competed here in the past and, in all honesty, failed each time. So, my best advice to anyone who is trying to be an Iron DM would be to not do anything that I did. Especially check the length of your post and secondly try not to write a story. Yes, a good DM is telling a story but there’s more here than just storytelling. Finally don’t let any judgement here affect your decisions to DM here or in person. Being an Iron DM takes a special talent and you can still be a great and, hopefully, beloved DM without winning. Okay now onto who I am. A long time ago a young pony was born in Ponyville, she grew up to become the Queen of all things pony….wait…ahem… Ysolde is a 49 year old woman with a wife three children, two dogs, four cats, and a large tank of fish. She lives close to a large city on the east coat and this year she’ll be legally since 2015spiritually married for 25 years. She works a boring desk job and her wife teaches in an inner city school which impresses her ever so much. Ysolde’s oldest twins are in college for engineering and astrophysics while her youngest is in high school. She’s been DMing since the 1980’s in various physical formats and electronic since 2013. She currently prefers the fifth edition as it is closest to the original D&D she grew up with. She’s DMed Cthulhu, Rifts, pathfinder, and many more over the years and has her own personal style she likes to consider chaotic with a dash of order. Ysolde’s biggest fandom after gaming is My Little Pony, but after that she’s into a host of other fandoms as well. The list is so long she decided not to list it for fear of missing one.
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Last edited by Ysolde; Mar 24th, 2023 at 11:47 AM. |
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The Iron DM competition is open and the crowds are going wild. Round 0 is live!
[A List of Challenging Ingredients] + [Your Imagination] = [Epic Adventure] Step into the stadium for a site-wide celebration of creativity, and write your way to glory. |
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I'm here to judge for a couple of weeks (not the last one) and do what I'm told.
![]() As for what the ideal submission looks like: I'll be sticking to the guidelines, and emphasising fun on the side. Would this be entertaining/engaging for people to play?
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I'm back for another year of Iron GM, and I'm excited to have once again been invited to be a judge, for... an 11th time now. Wow, time flies.
For those of you not already familiar with me from my previous experiences: I've been a published author for close to a decade now, with my work including 3rd edition, Pathfinder, and 5th edition. I've gone through self publishing, and my name is the lead author for multiple 3rd party adventure paths. I'm also a father of two, and although I have a degree in video game design, my day job is in traditional publishing. While I've only published a few dozen pages this last year - I have a lot of experience in what makes a good story, a good adventure, and good structure. I've been actively gaming since late 2nd edition, and have tried everything I can pull a group together for: from the mainstream 3e, 4e, 5e, oneDnD, and Pathfidner (my personal favorite), to less popular games like GURPS, WOD, and Powered By Apocolypse, to some relatively obscure systems like: Slayers, Mouseguard, Beast Hunters, Kids on Bikes, and Gardens of Ynn. And this only counts the games I've actually had a chance to play - I've read plenty more. I literally wrote the book on what an Iron GM judge should score on, but personally my biggest recommendation is that you take care that your work is clear and cohesive. Keep your work organized and think the whole thing out from one end to another to ensure that it's realistic. Remember that although judges will be reading it, you should be pretending that it might actually be used by a GM - and while it's okay to confuse or surprise players sometimes, it's always a bad idea to confuse or surprise the GM who is using your work. One of my biggest pet peeves is when the adventure presents the only path forward something that I think a party of adventurers is unlikely to do.
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Formatting (and back again) for the name change, but the content still applies.
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Posting: Slow and/or waffley due to RL. "Speak your mind even if your voice shakes." RBG She/Her |
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He/Him Want to see some Spelljamming? Join me and the other Astral Agents as jbear plots a course through Wildspace! roleINC on YouTube.
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Hello! Glad to be part of this year's Iron GM.
I have been GM'ing for quite some time and tend to run more games than I play in. I'm also a bit of a glutton for punishment, as I have a soft spot for the lesser-known games (which tend to garner less potential players--but I try anyway). However, my penchant for fringe rulesets has put quite a wide variety of formats in front of my eyes. From this experience, I can heartily agree with many of my fellow judges, that formatting can make or break your submission. Even the greatest idea in the world may not score well if those reading it cannot follow it (I'm looking at you, Mörk Borg) Beyond formatting, I love games and modules that try to do something creative and different. The trick is doing that something well. I enjoy seeing contestants using the ingredients in unique (but logical) ways. I look forward to seeing what everyone comes up with! Last edited by Silent Rain; Jul 13th, 2023 at 12:53 PM. |
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