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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 03:39 PM
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Name: Cháelin Tal Darzen

Race: Human (Variant)

Class & possible build comp: Grave Cleric

Background: Acolyte

 



 




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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 04:22 PM
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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 06:48 PM
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Hey all, i updated my feedback to reflect all of the current applications.

@IMP, i use Inkarnate! Pretty stoked on the quality and ease.

@Hal, i think that 2 years of being hunted and surviving those creatures would be enough to ignite the passion to want to be rid of them forever. We can call it two years. I recognize her story with the lord, and how she was trained and shaped, and about their bond. I can't yet see the balance between how much was expected of her and why the lord would sell her off for breaking his heart, when she had done nothing but strive to protect and defend his people.

So, im suggesting maybe roll it back in her story, still work with the motivation of her 'true goal' 'decimating the Loup-garou' and how she'll do whatever it takes to 'return the favor'.
Maybe she tried to tell the lord that she would find a way to kill them all, but standing in the blood-spattered court in the aftermath, just spurned him to laugh at her and cast her out of his life, the kind man she once knew gone..

Does this help? ^
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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 07:22 PM
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Oh... I'm tickled at the feedback. Glad you liked it. And hey... I'll vouch for Onward, he's very unique with his character creations. He's in my game too. Granted... it just started like a week ago, but yeah... I'm eager to see what that little goblin is going to do next.
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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 09:41 PM
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After reading through the intro and basic geography of the world Gaia (complete with background music), I think Turin would most likely be from the Tahomia area, although not really calling any one place home.

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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 10:13 PM
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Hey, thanks for the feedback Aoem, that whole writing sample took a lot of effort out of me, I'll say. Though an Echo knight? You might have confused my subclass with A7ice their, hehe.

Also, thanks for the vouch Imp, really appreciate the compliment.
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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 10:25 PM
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I would say Mystra's library would be located in 'Adual Dor' a holy city in the Wyerdvuud. I would pay to see Temuzura's encounter with Ophior to settle the score after she returns for Selyn.
Thanks! I updated Temuzura's predicament to reference Adual Dor. I look forward to the encounter with Ophior too!
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Old Nov 7th, 2021, 10:48 PM
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So, the 'Predicament' is our backstory and the writing sample is an RP/post sample?
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Old Nov 8th, 2021, 03:54 AM
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@Onward, oops, heh, my bad. I’ll update that soon.

@Hal the predicament is a writing prompt to be explained in the backstory and perhaps the writing sample as well.
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Old Nov 8th, 2021, 05:50 AM
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@A7ICE, Naza Drago is inspiring and savage. I would suggest the 'Dragon Clan' in Ickskyre to be her homeland. However, in a similar way to @Hal ^; these events of her past are no easy undertaking. You state,
"Finally, with help of her fellow mercenaries, she returned to the mountains attacked the Oredurs, destroying their clan and getting her revenge. She was eleven."

This, ^ is a legendary story, easily a heroes epic. The fight and passion for her to do that can still be burning hot. But, if shes already gone back and reaped her ultimate vengeance. Would she really only be level one? Maybe we can build toward her doing that when the game opens up in later levels?
I adjusted Naza's background with all the suggestions I like them.
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Name: Snowver

Race: Human Revenant

Class: Bard (lore)

Background: Investigator (Feature: Official Inquiry)

Bond: I was killed in my last investigation. I need to finish it, and see the head of the conspiracy fall.

Ideal: Corruption needs to be uncovered, and the powerful held accountable.

Flaw: If I'm given a choice between pursuing my goal or helping an innocent, I'll ignore them or give token help because my goal is for the greater good.

Trait 1: I don’t pay attention to the risks in a situation. Never tell me the odds.

Trait 2: I am always calm, no matter what the situation. I never raise my voice and try to keep my emotions contained.

 

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Old Nov 8th, 2021, 10:58 AM
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Name: "Flintlock" Fargus Cutter

Race: Hobgoblin

Class: Artillerist Artificer

Background: Reflavor of Clan CrafterWarsmith

Bond: I am who I am today because of my master. He taught me my craft, but he also taught me about strength of character.

Ideal: Real men should live by a code. Sometimes, walking the right path means taking the hard road.

Flaw: I surround myself with clutter, refusing to throw anything away. Hey... every master craftsman has a system, right?

Trait 1: I function extraordinarily well under pressure.

Trait 2: I take great pride in hard day's work and a job well done.

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