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Old Apr 14th, 2021, 01:09 PM
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I ninja'd you there GeneT (kind of, I spent ages on the above message to another player) - I'll get back to you later tonight!

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Old Apr 14th, 2021, 03:00 PM
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Old Apr 14th, 2021, 03:17 PM
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Sorry GeneT! <.< ^^'''

Otherwise, this is not the post you're looking for~

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Old Apr 14th, 2021, 04:55 PM
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Old Apr 14th, 2021, 08:56 PM
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Old Apr 14th, 2021, 09:25 PM
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If interested. I modified the opening paragraph of my character's very short story 'Acquiring a Master.' Essentially rewriting the reason for the lightsaber challenge and giving it a different feel.

Added spoilerbutton regarding pronouns. And fixed my mistakes in that regard.
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Old Apr 14th, 2021, 11:15 PM
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Old Apr 15th, 2021, 03:18 AM
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Old Apr 15th, 2021, 05:56 AM
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I've marked those players that have had a bit of back and forth in terms of feedback with me and who also already picked a master as "done". That's only to say that I've gotten those things that I needed, but they can certainly continue to change or add things, which I will happily look at. If we talked and you are not marked done it's probably because you've not yet selected a master.

Coincidentally two of those characters have selected Diaboye Bede - I will get the both of you a more in-depth description of her in the near future, in case you might want to work a bit with it.

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Old Apr 15th, 2021, 03:42 PM
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Posting interest. Think I'm going to write up a non force sensitive character.
Welcome Silent! Sounds great, it'd be a unique perspective in this game, funnily enough, so I'm excited for it!

If you were thinking about doing a droid let me know, as I would need to compile some options there - that's unless you'd pick up a stock model out of a lineup.
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