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Ealian Finuthin
Name: Ealian Finuthin
Race: High-Elf (Sun Elf)
Class: Wizard (Bladesinger) level 3
Background: Urban Bounty Hunter
Age: 121 years old
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic-Good
Description: Ealian Finuthin at first appears fairly unimpressive, of average height for an elf (5'7") and fairly skinny. Although not heavily muscled, he has well-toned muscles and carries himself well. He has tanned, almost golden skin and honey-blonde hair that reaches just past his shoulders. His face has a feint-blue geometric tattoo which makes his face quite distinctive. His arms also have a patterned tattoo that is vaguely similar to a black-and-white tiger.
Ealian tends to dress in a light green-tinted leather armor that doesn't restrict his movement and clothes in various shades of green. He carries a long, slim sword with an ornate hilt on his left hip and a matching dagger on the other.
Traits:
- I can be overly stubborn, even when it makes sense to give in. I find it especially hard to think that a human or one of the other lesser races might have a better idea than me in any given situation.
- I am very curious, I have to know everything that's going on around me. This has gotten me into trouble numerous times but sometimes I just have to know.
Ideal: Perfection. I strive towards perfection in everything I do. Making mistakes annoys me greatly, and the biggest mistake I ever made was allowing my sister to leave me behind. It has left me with a guilt complex, feeling responsible not only for my own actions and safety, but for the safety of my family, other elves and friends I make along the way.
Bond: My twin sister is depending on me to find a cure to her condition as I'm positive that the effort of the rest of our family will fail. I have failed my sister once before and will not do so again, even if it means associating with people I would normally consider beneath me to get the support I need to find what I'm looking for.
Flaw: I will take great personal risks to learn lost arcane secrets, especially those that might have originated in Myth Drannor. I belief the cure for what ails my sister can be found there and finding something from that ancient civilization is blooming into an obsession.
Player Goals: I’m an old-timer and remember owning the grey box a long, long time ago, so I love the non-restrictive world that is the Forgotten Realms, perfect for sandbox games. I have fond memories of the Dales in particular after playing in several campaigns there an equally long, long time ago.
I am interested both in political games and good old-fashioned exploration, dungeon-crawls and everything in between. What matters most to me is having good role-playing opportunities, with NPCs, but especially the other PCs.
Character Goals: Ealian’s goals in the game would center around finding hidden knowledge, ancient magic etc. Ealian has a problem to solve and a twin-sister to save and is convinced that the solution to the mysterious condition that ails his sister will be found in or around Myth Drannor. Sadly, his elven friends and family think he’s gone mad with grief (and they might not be wrong) and feel that the solution lies elsewhere, if it can be found at all.
Ealian is not stupid and knows that he will need to find staunch companions to help him survive the dangers of the ancient Myth Drannor. He is not interested in hiring mercenaries or traveling there with people he doesn’t know, or trust. Like most elves, he takes the long view and is perfectly willing to spend time building a good relationship with trustworthy allies to make sure they are all ready to do what needs doing in Myth Drannor.
The birth of twins is rare in any elven community, and Ealian and his twin sister Ealiara were destined for greatness from birth. Both trained with their uncle Kytaran as bladesingers, working to find those who wrong elves in some way and bringing them to justice. The three of them have worked as a team of sorts, a pair of apprentices assisting the master bladesinger.
All that changed a few months ago. Ealara had always been even more curious than her brother, and for some reason she decided to use a bit of downtime while their master, Kytaran, went to pay his respects to a master of their bladesinging order to follow up on an old story all elves that grow up near the Dales hear as children. The story involved a gem that was said to be the Tear of Sehanine Moonbow, stolen from her by another god, Erevan Ilesere, and hidden out of her reach in the realm of men.
The elven twins had met a group of human treasure hunters who claimed to have a map leading to a treasure, and for some reason, Ealara had gotten the idea that a part of the description the men gave described the Tear. Ealian thought it was a stretch, at best. During the following night, while Ealian was studying his spellbook, working on perfecting a new spell, his sister snuck out. She left him a note telling him that she had to follow up on the story told by the men, and asked him not to follow her.
Heartbroken over the fact that his twin sister had decided to leave him for this idiotic quest, Ealian started his journey home, alone. Only after almost three days of traveling did he get a feeling of deep foreboding, like something was terribly wrong. He headed back immediately and once he got back to the small frontier town he tried his best to follow the group of humans his sister had chosen to travel with.
The trail had gone cold and Ealian found himself wandering the forest, trying to follow his instinct and his heart, trying to find his sister. It was like finding a needle in a haystack and felt like an impossible task. But just as a needle in the haystack can be found with a magnet strong enough, Ealian eventually stumbled upon his sister, wandering aimlessly in the forest. Most of her equipment was gone and she had a terrible wound on her shoulder, but otherwise she seemed fine. Except that she had no memory of what happened to her and the men she had traveled with.
Ealian returned home with his sister, but during the journey they found out that her condition was deteriorating rapidly. Her strength was leaving her, and eventually she became too weak to walk, her hands to weak to lift food to her mouth. Ealian carried his sister on his back for two days, until they were overtaken by a patrol of elves, who helped them the rest of the way home.
Ealian and his family tried everything over the next few weeks to restore his sister to health, but to no avail. In the end, they consulted a dryad seeress, deep in the forest. The cryptic answer she gave indicated that his sister had been cursed, and that the only way to undo the curse was to go back to where it originated.
This was vague indeed, but Ealian felt like he had no choice but to follow up on it. The others were not convinced, and wanted to explore other options, calling on a high-priestess of Corellon Larethian, asking her to travel to the Dales to try to undo the curse with her potent divine magic. When his family did not want to pursue the cryptic answer of the seeress, Ealian decided to go alone. Like his sister a few weeks earlier, he left in the night, just before he was supposed to go with his uncle on a mission to find a human noble that had murdered an elf during a hunt in the woods.
Ealian traveled to human lands, determined to find a way to find out where his sister went, and what happened to her, hoping that if he does, he might be able to break the curse.
"You heard that story ‘bout that poncy elf sitting by the fire? Ealian is his name. A real stuck up snob, but don’t tell him that. He works with Kytaran Finuthin, the bladesinger who was the guest of honor at the solstice festival last year. You remember, right? He performed that dance that all the broads went wild over," Dario, a one-eyed half-elf slurs, rolling his one good eye in disgust. Brugo just shakes his head, bushy eyebrows drawing so close together that they touch in the middle. "Well, I’ll tell you about it,” the drunk Dario continues, throwing his head back as he pours the remainder of his shot glass into his mouth.
“Me and a few associates were hired by the Rotan boys to track down a group suspected of working for the Black Network. Not to take them out or anything so dramatic. No, they apparently killed some uppity moon elf and took his sword. The Rotan-brothers told us to forget anything else, that the elves would ransom that blade with enough gold to keep us all in whores and liquor until the end of time. We weren’t the lead on that hunt though. We were the hired muscle for the most tasty moon-elf I have ever had the displeasure of not having a romp with. You might have seen her, calls herself Nalia. Red hair, green eyes. Body to die for. But anyway. We tracked them down. There were about fifteen of them, going slow up the road to the Dales with a couple of wagons full of who knows what.”
The half-elf waved a serving maid over and ordered another round of drinks for the table. “We stalked them for the better part of the day, until they stopped for the night by a small creek. Nalia ordered us to wait for a bit, since she wanted the guards to get sleepy before sneaking in and finding that sword. But we weren’t the only ones hunting that night. As we are making our approach, what do we see but a trio of poncy elves, walking up to the camp from the nearby woods, not even bothering to hide.”
Dario pauses for a moment as the waitress brings the drinks, and gratefully takes a large swig from a tankard, pinching the girl’s behind as she walks away, deftly avoiding her slap. “The leader, the Kytaran fellow I told you about,” he says, continuing his story. “He has a pair of balls on him. Twenty or so guys facing him, and he just tells them to deliver the sword or they will all die this night. Bloody hell, that’s cold, right?” he says, and his companions nod in unison.
“Me and the boys, we decide to wait this out. Let them fight it out and take the sword from the winner. Smart, that’s us, right? Only, we can’t find Nalia. So we figure she’s done a runner. Anyway, those Black Network guys are having none of what the elves are selling. About half of them shoot at the trio of elves with crossbows, but they just mutter something, and the quarrels miss. Every single one of them. Must have been fifteen quarrels. And not one hit. And now the elves are a blur. They draw swords, so the rest of the guys rush out to fight them while the crossbowmen reload. Damn guys, if you ever have to fight a bladesinger, you should make sure you’ve paid the priests for a nice funeral first. Those elves weren’t messing around. The leader opened up with a spell, burning half or the Black Network guys where they stood. And then they sliced into the rest of them.”
Dario takes another gulp of ale, wiping the foam off his mouth with the back of his hand, before continuing. “About that time the leader of the Black Network guys decides to make himself scarce. He grabs a box, which I presume has the elven blade in it, and uses a spell to create some sort of a portal that he steps through, and poof, he’s away. The leader of the elves, he doesn’t miss a beat. He says something to the other two and then with a snap of his fingers he’s gone too, through a portal of his own. You would think that the other two elves would be doomed, facing all the rest of the Black Network guys, probably twenty-five or thirty guys. Well, they weren’t. They fought back to back, so close that it looked like one elf with two swords. The others never stood a chance. They were cut down like corn on harvest day. When the fighting was over, there must have been fifty bodies around the elves. All dead. All killed with a single blow. Think about it, every blow a killing blow. How do you fight people like that? You can’t, that’s how,” he says, finishing his tankard.
As he slumps over the table, feeling dizzy after a long night of hard drinking, he finishes with words of wisdom for his friends: “So, guys, take my word for it. You don’t want to give that elf any cause to want you dead, that much is clear. And if you find an elven sword, just hand it back when they send someone for it. Trust me.”
Brugo, clearly unsatisfied with the lose end of the tale, pokes Dario. “Hey, what about the broad? Nalia? She just split on you?”
The question brings a little life back into Dario. “Not even close. If you think the other elves had a pair on them, she must have had balls made of pure adamantite, that one. You know what she did while we were watching?” He doesn’t give Brugo or the others a chance to respond before rambling on. “She crawled into one of the wagons, poped on a pair of manacles and when the elves finally killed the last guy not clever enough to run she shouted for help, playing the damsel in distress, saying she got kidnapped. Last we saw of her she was walking away with the elves, looking back to us and winking. I’m willing to bet she ended up stealing that sword from them. My kind of girl.”
“It is time to leave, Ealian.” Kytaran’s voice sounded cold. “We leave with the sunrise. We have to be in Waterdeep in a weeks’ time, if we want to have any chance of catching that rat-faced human. He‘ll be heading to his family there, but they will send him into hiding once they figure out what he did.”
The tall Sun Elf looked at his nephew with a sad look on his face. “I have already said goodbye to Ealiara. The priests will do all they can for her. All we can do now is concentrate on our work,” he said, closing the door as he left Ealian's quarters.
After he left, Ealian closed his backpack and slung it over his shoulder. He took one last look at the spartan room, wondering if he'd ever see his home again. At least he had some direction to follow, something he could do to help his sister. Even if the odds seemed stacked against him.
He walked slowly through the corridors, not sure what to say to his sister. His twin sister whom he’d spent his entire life with. And now he might never see her again. Almost too soon he found himself in front of Ealiara’s room.
As he opened the door he could see that she had gotten worse. She was lying in a divan, her head resting on a thick pillow, a book on a reading stand next to the bed. She was too weak to hold the book but could just about manage to flip the pages. As he walked in, she tried to sit up straight, with limited success. It pained him to see how slow and sluggish she had become, wincing as she rose up.
He slowly kissed the back of her hand. “Kytaran is leaving for Waterdeep in the morning, sister. And from there, who knows. But I’m not going with him. I’m leaving. The seer said that I would find what I seek in Myth Drannor, since I assume that’s where you went, and what I seek is a cure for whatever it is that ails you. So the cure must be there.”
Ealian stroked his sister’s forehead slowly. She looked older. “We will break this curse, Ealiara. No matter the cost I will not fail. I can’t spend the rest of my life without you.” His eyes well up. “It’s just, I don’t know how to do this alone. We have only been separated once before and that ended in disaster. I’ve never gone into danger without you to watch my back. It feels as if I’m leaving the best part of myself behind,” he says, hugging his sister tightly.
“You will be fine,” his sister said, her voice calm and controlled. “All I have to do is wait here and get bored while you go on the most important quest of your life. I wish things weren’t the way they are, and we were headed out together. But we must play the notes we are given and finish the song. And my part is over, for now. And you must finish our song.”
Ealiara quickly untied a green ribbon from her braided hair. “Here, take this, and remember me every time you touch it,” she says, rising up to tie the ribbon around her brother’s thick ponytail. Ealian looked at her wide-eyed. “I can’t. The queen, she gave it to you, I can’t possibly take it,” he says, starting to untie the ribbon again. Ealiara held his hands, stopping him. “And now I’m giving it to you. If it carries the good will of the queen, you will need it much more than I will. Take it, and remember me.”
Ealian stopped struggling. “I will be back, you know. And you will be waiting for me when I do,” he said, his voice firm now. The twins hugged for a long moment before he kissed her cheek and turned to leave the room. As he walked out he had to force himself not to look back.
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People say I'm evil and twisted, but I really have the heart of a young boy. In a jar, on my desk.
I have taken the Oath of Sangus .
Last edited by kymrel; Jun 18th, 2018 at 03:44 PM .