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Old 06-03-2019, 12:39 AM
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Application complete! I’d welcome any feedback if you have the time
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Old 06-03-2019, 07:43 AM
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Can I apply as a kobold?

This sure is an intriguing game, Hox! If i didn't have my hands full in RL at the moment I'd apply! Have fun in selections!
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Old 06-03-2019, 11:06 AM
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Name: Map Maker of the Land “Map”

Race: Tabaxi

Class: Monk

Background: Guild Artisan (Cartographer)

Description: Looks like a cheetah standing up in brown cloth pants

Personality: Obsessive personality that is fixated on learning something new everyday which can be some of the most mundane things like writing the description of a new bird it just saw. One of its favorite things to do is retrieve any foreign objects that float into the port from other lands, which he hates as well since he doesn’t like to get wet. Even if it’s a piece of a ship with half a name on it is documented extensively.

Backstory: Map is the only child of an extended Tabaxi family that had been living on the outskirts of the port since anyone can remember. They hunted what little game was available without going too deep into the woods and traded the pelts with those in town. Some people are afraid of what lies beyond the little port, Map is not one of those people. She constantly has fantasies of what could be out there from new people to exotic places. She started learning cartography and how to make maps of the edge of the woods. She wanted to delve deeper into the unknown, but knew that such a venture would be folly if she went alone. She would go about town trying to find other like minded individuals willing to go where nobody else would. She eventually found those individuals, and they began a guild.
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Old 06-04-2019, 05:53 PM
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Name: Vladomir Vladisloff
Race: Human
Class: Fighter
Background: Entertainer

Description: Valdomir stands 5'8" with short brown hair, semi-permanent 5 o'clock shadow, and his practical gambeson. Also he has a strange look to him that even when he is sparkling clean and fresh he somehow still looks dirty. He could easily be mistaken for a Northman, until he opens his mouth and a drawling gypsy accent come stumbling out.

Personality: Valdomir is always one to choose drinking and entertaining over fighting, but if you choose to fight run for cover. Valdomir is always looking for a crowd to entertain, whether it be with song and dance or song and knife juggling, even only three people in his mind is a crowd. Does he preform for fame, no. For money? I mean, I wouldn't say no to a little coin, but still, no. He preforms for the smiles and the sheer enjoyment he gets from impressing a crowd.

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Reason for being in Shipwreck: Valdomir finds himself at the dock of Shipwreck once again. Hearing the same old sailor's tales of new islands and women who live in the see. Vladomir had tried the sea sprayed life of a sailor for a whole ten minuets once. They kicked him off the voyage for getting sea sick as soon as he set foot on the deck. This city was always a good spot to preform for some "passing through town" money. He set up outside his favorite dive pub, the Dunked Witch, and laid out his coin purse and started warming up.
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Old 06-04-2019, 09:33 PM
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I will say the current patriarch has high ambitions of returning to a time when his family had more than just one city to lay claim to, and part of that, to him, is making sure the bloodline remains strong, with their signature storm magic being the truest indicator of bloodline. Thus those with “weaker” blood are basically thought of as bastards/mutts, regardless of the circumstances of their birth, and those with the “stronger” blood are thought of as legitimate heirs.
Awesome, that's pretty much how I figured it worked out.

If you have any other feedback, I'd love to hear it.
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Old 06-04-2019, 10:52 PM
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Ok I think I'm done. Did I mess anything up or miss anything?
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Old 06-06-2019, 08:49 PM
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Hi DM -

Do you want us to create you game room?

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Old 06-07-2019, 04:48 AM
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race: Half Elf
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Old 06-07-2019, 09:57 PM
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I understand there are no stars but is there a moon?


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Old 06-07-2019, 11:39 PM
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I’m going to try to give everyone who asked for feedback something tomorrow. But as just a general comment, you guys are getting my imagination firing. I love what some of you have given me to work with.


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Yes. Still have a moon.
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Do you want us to create you game room?

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Old 06-08-2019, 02:47 AM
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In that case, could you give me me some feedback on my PC as well?
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Old 06-08-2019, 03:54 AM
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Me as well please.
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Old 06-08-2019, 10:27 AM
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Been a while since I've played here. This looks interesting, so, here goes:

Name: Myles Marlowe
Race: Human (Variant +1 Int, +1 Dex, Feat = Keen Mind)
Class: Wizard (Diviner)
Background: Sage

 


Description: Very tall and thin. Not a whole lot of physical grace, but he's surprisingly quick. Youthful face, but some gray hairs are starting to show through already. He's clearly wearing family heirloom clothing; the richly detailed deep blue robes of pre-cataclysm merchants. Of course, these are faded, a little too short for him, and the embroidered cuffs and edges have worn down to almost nothing.

Personality: Shy. Stutters when anxious, and new situations and threats cause anxiety. Very self-assured when discussing the arcane or things he knows well.

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Old 06-08-2019, 11:11 AM
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I would like some feedback
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Old 06-08-2019, 02:50 PM
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I think I got everyone who requested feedback. Sorry if I missed you.

I'm going to take this week to set up the game and make selections/ start up the game next weekend.




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