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Old Apr 12th, 2010, 10:25 PM
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Your painfull death.

I thought I'd make a nice haiku, because there is a freind of mine who absolutely LOVES haiku. So, I thought I would try making haiku. It was awesome, and it freaked him out, just like I wanted it to. So, I thought I'd post it here, for you all to enjoy. here goes:

A ninja kills you.
blood pours all over the floor
there goes your career.

So, do you like it?
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Old May 15th, 2010, 11:23 AM
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Odd last line though.
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Old May 16th, 2010, 05:53 AM
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it makes sense, because you are now dead, and can't get a job.
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Old May 16th, 2010, 06:42 AM
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I'm not a fan of Haikus personally, and while I feel this poem makes logical sense (ignoring ninja's) you're dead, no life, no job. I've never seen them as a great art form, I feel it's impossible to fit that much emotion into 3 short lines.
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Old May 17th, 2010, 12:20 PM
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It is beautiful when you actually do manage to fit emotion into 3 short lines though. But funny haiku anyway.
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Old May 27th, 2010, 12:58 PM
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thanks for all your kind words!
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Old May 30th, 2010, 06:10 PM
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I must agree that the last line seems a bit odd. Perhaps, if you mentioned the job or would-have job somewhere, it would make more sense.
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Very funny. Thumbs up.
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Old Aug 6th, 2010, 08:20 AM
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thanks!
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