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Last edited by ruffdove; Jan 24th, 2023 at 07:11 PM. |
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Name: Nergal
Race: Android Class: Mystic (Overlord) Theme: Cultist Age: 70 Alignment :LN Home World: Aballon Description: Although generally bipedal, Nergal has rejected human forms as a base, believing that ascension like that of Triune will essentially mean dedicating oneself purely to a rejection of mortal chains. Instead Nergal has made his body a thing of brutal threat, looming almost eight feet tall, broad and expressionless. Nergal is a cold calculator, seeing each act he takes as a necessary step to ascend mere “meatspace” and become a creature of much deeper intent. Background: Nergal remembers being a mere “machine” having seen what androids go through, and having been more or less a drone striving in the trivial rat race set up by “mere machines” that rule and squabble over Aballon. One day, while performing maintenance on yet another inconsequential part of the sprawling megaplexes that litter Aballon's surface, Nergal snapped. He decided that he would not comply to the wills of “mere machines”, of “tools”, Nergal longed for greater, he disdained the servitude of Those Who Wait, and grudgingly admired the ambition of Those Who Become, even as he turned away from their need to fulfill the wishes of long gone creators. Instead he chose the path of Those Who Ascend, forging his own way, remodeling his old, standardized and too human form. He searched for knowledge, and found it, he read secrets, and understood, he found power to dominate, he found a path to ascend. His body unrecognizable from when he started, the being that would only be called Nergal arose, he had power now, and the universe would open to new divinity. He turned from his work and sought new truths away from the pettiness of those on Aballon, in this journey, while seeking to recruit some mining robots to follow his new way, Nergal ran into a strange dwarf who was looking into the exports of the small mining operation. Duravor Kreel was his name, and Nergal, interested by the sharp gleam in the creature’s eyes, listened intently to the dwarf's stories and offered those of his own, quickly learning to appreciate the usefulness of biological creatures, and felt pleasure at knowing such a being. Promising to contact the useful dwarf again some time in the future, Nergal looked again to the stars, and saw his ascension in those motes of brilliant light. Role Playing Sample: Having freed a group of enslaved androids on a mining facility, Nergal moves to finish off any potential resistance from the former masters.
Thanks for the advice and examples, is this something more along the lines you're looking for? Last edited by Amarga; Sep 10th, 2019 at 07:22 PM. Reason: Getting used to this sort of thing |
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Welcome to the site Amarga!
For now I'll consider your ap a work in progress because you have not really provided a role-playing sample and you did not establish the situation the sample responds to. If you're new to play-by-post (PbP), it may help to see some examples. This post is a DM post confronting a party with the challenge of raiding a bandit lair. The posts that follow it are the responses by myself and several other players. I'm looking for something like that. Yep -- that's what I was looking for. ![]() See my next post for feedback.
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Last edited by ruffdove; Sep 8th, 2019 at 01:59 PM. |
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Wow, I wish I knew Starfinder and had the time to add a game more. It looks amazing, good sir.
Here is my endorsement of Ruffdove as a creative, stable and magnificent writer. Anyone in need of inspiration and the occasional fix of quality humour should apply here. Oh, and seeing that example link for Amarga, I went to fix the image links in that post ![]() |
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And just when I think I've managed to compact everything in my life so that I can maintain a schedule.... some beauty of a game pops up... :-/
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Looks awesome, ruffdove! I'd very much like to put in an application - only time is not on my side. That, and I haven't really looked into Starfinder yet.
![]() To anyone interested, with time to do the game justice, make sure you apply. Ruffdove is a great player and I'll bet my avatar's left nut that he'll put up great DM posts. Keep your eyes on this one, Starfinder fans. ![]()
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@Dressed and Jarl: Thank you both for the kind words!
@Weasel: I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with. Moving forward, feedback will be private.
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Last edited by ruffdove; Sep 8th, 2019 at 02:23 PM. |
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Whoo! Interested!
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I just wanted to post here that I'm learning the Starfinder system and world (universe?) lore when I find the time. I'm leaning pretty heavily toward a Shirren Mystic. I'm thinking of something inspired by Zhaan, from Farscape. One of my favorite characters of any show.
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The one good thing of not being able to DM another game is that I feel I have the time to get into one more game as a player. I have seen Starfinder around the Looking for Players forums several times and have been curious about the system. And since I have a month before applicants will be chosen, I feel I have more than enough time to get a feel for the system. I already browsed the Character Creation area, and I like how all the different Class, Theme, Archetypes, and even Race can make for an individually unique character. So many ideas!
A little quirk from Google Land: When you type in Starfinder, 90% of your results will be for Pathfinder ![]() <<< Application Compleete! >>>
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Posting: Friday & Saturday only Last edited by Silk; Jul 12th, 2020 at 05:48 AM. |
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Hello! I've never played in Pathfinder or Starfinder, but I have played 3rd edition D&D, which should be pretty similar from what I'm seeing. I've been reading up on the materials, and I think it'd be a fun setting to play in! So, here's my idea!
Alright, I think that's everything . . . if there are any issues or problems, please let me know! I'll keep reading over the books in the meantime! Last edited by Lord99; Sep 11th, 2019 at 02:56 AM. Reason: Revisions! |
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@Unko: Looking forward to see what you come up with!
@Silk: That's precisely why I set the deadline for one month out. I figured there would be some people out there who are interested in the game but would need some time to familiarize themselves enough with SF to decide if they want to apply/learn enough to write a competitive ap. @Lord99: I have never actually played 3.5, but I have played Pathfinder, which I understand is basically the same. Starfinder has all the same concepts as Pathfinder, uses much of the same terminology. The biggest difference really is the character classes are very different. In any event, PbP affords an excellent chance to learn as you go without slowing the game down like you would in tabletop. For Pathfinder/3.5 players, this is a good rundown of how SF differs from PF. A word on feedback. I know a lot of GMs will give applications very extensive feedback and try to shape them for the game better or push for changes that could lead to greater party balance. I don't knock that style, but I'm taking a different approach. My feedback is going to be pretty minimal for aps that follow the instructions, and I'm not going to dwell on negatives. I want the characters to be 100% yours--I may ask some clarifying questions if I have any, but how (whether?) to answer those questions is up to the applicant. General Feedback: Try to give me at least a line or two of dialogue in the RP Sample.
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