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It looks like you've covered all of the major bases, but there is one important element missing. Give the advertisement another read through, and once you find it, I'll mark your application as complete.
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I want to throw my hat into the ring for this! ☄️
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Perfect. You're checked in!
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Gaijin, I would love any feedback you might have for me.
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Hi, Humble Athena! I gave your entry another readthrough and I have no critical notes that you need to worry about.
However, if I were to make one request, it would be to add a bullet point or two about what motivates her. As I read it, Jas seems to be pragmatically focused on her own continued existence and enjoys the arts, but doesn't have anything external that compels her (Anymore, at least). Many connections of convenience, but no tangible bonds. Give me a couple of strings that I can't resist pulling. If you are selected, there will be some additional context about the world and Vampyr for you to consider, but nothing that should clash with Jasmillae's backstory as written.
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Hey nyx, here's hoping we get in together
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Thank you! I'll see what I can massage into her.
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Is there any particular lore that is assumed here about the Lycan? Would my wererat have inherited his condition? Or acquired it from a bite? I'd like to work that story into my background more.
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That would be neat!
@Gaijin, Liadan is complete. I welcome any feedback you might have.
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Gave Liadan a readthrough and I think you've hit all of the important marks. Living with the affliction for an extended period of time would mean that Liadan has also experienced the side of lycanthropy that is more curse than gift, but as that will vary from beast to beast, it is something that would be delved into more deeply after player selections have been made. Quote:
To actually be Afflicted, a victim must both be infected and satisfy some mystical condition that depends on the beast type before the virus can be cleared by the victim's immune system. (E.g. Werewolves being infected during a Full Moon.) Not all beast conditions are known, and not all beasts are confirmed to be eligible. However, predators (and pest) tend to be most common due the higher risk of injury and blood exposure. Edit: Players with unconventional variants are welcome to propose their own mystical condition, or leave it ambiguous. They wouldn't necessarily have put 2 and 2 together, especially if they have had multiple exposures over an extended period of time.
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If Strangemund is living dangerously, then I'm bordering insane.
Not only am I going with harrowed, I'm also doing to try an exotic/discouraged race. Yeah, I'm a rebel. Wanna fight about it? ☄️ Name: Xopingthhppth, aka Ghost Race: Kobold Affliction: While harrowed is preferred, if needed for party balance, could be rebuilt into a wererat, a consequence of eating a diseased ratHarrowed Class: Monk (could be rogue if needed) Alignment: He's too focused on survival and being scared to think about such things. He's selfish by nature, but is willing to lend a hand if it doesn't cost or inconvenience him.Neutral with Good tendencies Description: White scales with painful-looking cracks running throughout the body of Xopingthhppt, or "Ghost" as he is known to most. A lightweight, threadbare shift provides a modicum of modesty, although if the kobold was embarrassed by his appearance, he didn't show it. His odd-colored scales and a prideful visage aren't the only thing that tells you at Ghost is not your typical kobold. He carries his head high, his large, ruby-like eyes constantly darting from side to side as he absorbs his surroundings. There is an intelligence in those eyes, a cunning beyond that of what one would expect from such a savage beast. His movements are large and perfectly balanced, like a wild animal, although at this times he seems like a wild animal held in a cage too small for it. A tall wooden stick graces his right hand, the center portion worn smooth by the constant pressure of his scaled claws. Motivation & Growth: Despite, or perhaps because of, his lifetime of terror, Ghost maintains a constant smile and fun loving attitude when around those he knows. He is very distrustful of strangers and confused about the ways of civilization, but is actively trying to learn and adapt to his new reality. Ghost's motivation is to simply survive. He is in a strange culture, speaking a strange language and surrounded by people that look at him like a cat would look at a shoestring. His growth will be in learning the culture and figuring out to trust others, when everyone else he has been has been untrustworthy. The ultimate goal is for him to go from surviving to really living. Special Note: While no one is certain, it is believed that Ghost's albinism is what is preventing him from contracting the Monstrum Virus. It is also the disease that is killing him (or at least weakening him). Another Note: My experience in 5e is limited, but I'm starting to play it a bit. Just mentioning because while I do know the basics, I may need help with the rule set from time to time. Last edited by Squeak; Nov 29th, 2023 at 03:07 PM. |
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Squeak's coming in hot out of left field!
Looks like you've met all the marks and then some, I'll get Xopingthhppth added to the list as Completed. Don't worry about inexperience with 5e, I've found it to be a great system for storytelling, and I'll be more than available to work through and around the rules as needed.
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Application should be complete.
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